sorry for the re-upload D:. I - uh...needed to fix something but didn't have time, and i didn't wanna leave it up there for so long (i get this obsessive fixing disorder >.>;; if i know there's something wrong wit it, i'd wanna fix it....so i get really agitated with people critiquing me after i finish a piece because a part of me wants to fix it, but another part of me wants to forget it xDD. i love WIP-critiques though.), so i deleted it D:.
The grids took so much time *sob* This is also the first picture I've ever re-sketched after rough-colouring it. had to redo the perspective grid too = (. so i hope you guys like this version : )
My process can be seen here: [link] (this includes the old version : D) close-up of the cakes. because i spent so much time on them D: [link]
Edit: I can't believe I'm saying this, but if you don't have an actual critique, please refrain from saying negative things like "I've seen better from you" or "it's kind of blah". I mean, seriously, just because you don't like it, it doesn't mean it's blah. Unfortunately, "blah" is not a critique, nor is it helpful. Thanks. It's weird how i seem to get shit a lot on my fanart, but hardly ever get any on my original work.
I think this is really well done, I love the melted sugar or whateverr that pink liquid is and the shading, and the see through paint on the walls are really cool. The swirls on the bath tub are a little random, but the colors are nicely blended. I do think that there should have been a bit of a pink sheen on the mirror and on the tiles closest to the tub. But overrall, a really good piece of fanart.
But hey, you should be glad that your original works get more attention than your fanart--for the rest of us mortals it's the other way around
But hey, you should be glad that your original works get more attention than your fanart--for the rest of us mortals it's the other way around